I like this video but the ended felt abrupt. When creating a narrative with any medium, keep in mind having a clear beginning, middle, and end for the viewer. A sequence of coming back from the walk or something like that could work. Also, as the quality of your work is already really good, something to work on would be to watch for too much camera shake. It can be a little difficult for the viewer to watch and take away from the content of what you are making.
I like this video but the ended felt abrupt. When creating a narrative with any medium, keep in mind having a clear beginning, middle, and end for the viewer. A sequence of coming back from the walk or something like that could work. Also, as the quality of your work is already really good, something to work on would be to watch for too much camera shake. It can be a little difficult for the viewer to watch and take away from the content of what you are making.
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