Nice narrative and images. The editing is a tiny bit inconsistent, the tone and color shifts from image to image. Be careful with that when presenting a series of images together unless it is used as a storytelling tool. For example, if you images are warmer, brighter, and softer in the dream sequence, that can symbolize the act of dreaming.
Nice narrative and images. The editing is a tiny bit inconsistent, the tone and color shifts from image to image. Be careful with that when presenting a series of images together unless it is used as a storytelling tool. For example, if you images are warmer, brighter, and softer in the dream sequence, that can symbolize the act of dreaming.
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